Chapter 3
In chapter three, Jack, Simon, and Ralph are having a conversation about everything they need to do. They already know that the fire isnt burning enough smoke to make a signal. Their next plan was to build shelter. Simon had started building two shelters, which were in position, but shaky. No one except Ralph, Jack, and Simon are doing any work. Jack wants to kill a pig because everyone wants meat, and he wont stop talking about it. Ralph is more focused on being rescued and making shelter.
Chapter 4
In chapter four, Jack painted his face to be like a warrior. Ralph goes to check on the fire, and finds out it died, and that the watchers are gone. Then Jack comes back with a pig, and is all happy and wants to kill it and cook it. Piggy and Ralph confront him about leaving the fire and letting it die. Everyone is very angry at Jack beacause they could have been rescued, but instead he decided to leave the fire and go catch a pig.
Chapter 5
In chapter five, Ralph calls a meeting. He decided on some new rules, including one saying they have to keep the fire going. Jack gets annoyed with him, and all the littluns. The littluns are very scared of this beast thing that they have seen in their nightmares. Then Simon gets irritated with the things Ralph is saying, and they get in a fight.
Abbi Dobbs
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